I Woke Up Late This Morning

my day today was ruined
before I even got out of bed
the cat died

sometime in the night
and did not lick my face
at dawn as usual
 

TEARS BEFORE BREAKFAST

a new poet or two, a new pair of books
garnered from the annual poetry festival
     to which I am a first-timer
which shall I read first?

setting aside my Sunday newspaper
time enough for that reality stuff later
I pitch into a slim volume

reflecting now on that sudden onset of darkness
I never knew what hit me

strumming, murmuring, swaying, swooning
knocked off balance
my sense of me, split
me, spilt all over the floor
     like that carton of milk after I saw
     that mouse on the kitchen floor that time
floored now this time

I'm smitten by my new pet poet
the softest kitten fur
     playful batting mitten paws
     squeaky bright eyes following the yarn trail

Curses! I have been hornswaggled by a new poet
a new sweet, sultry voice
irresistibly drowning me in siren song

just what I needed

what was it that had falsely me assured me that I could
     read just a little before breakfast
     then get up from the couch
     grab a second cup of coffee
     finish reading the newspaper
and get on with my life?

now I have poet vertigo
nothing looks the same
I'm different
the world is reeling and demands a new accounting

I'm busy
     inundated
     deafened, blinded to the cares of my
ordinarily demanding world I see
untidy
     dirty dishes, wash yourselves!
     dust bunnies, go back to sleep!
          the daddy long legs will
               take care of your pesky residents for me

and I will cry real tears before breakfast

hearing the calming soothe, the echo of your voice
     the crickets low chirping
     the mourning dove's coo-oooh!-coo-coo-coo-ing
     the creek noise flowing, slowing my start, stilling my heart

now... wolves howling, bats yowling, dogs growling
     unfed, unloved
babies wailing, diaper-pailing daddies
     nailing boards up before the storm

paling shimmering light, stars, night
     waves waving, sailing
     trailing, womanly, four feet behind my newest poet

my voluptuous curves curving, serving, trotting
besotted beside my newest dearest friend
would this never end!

plotting a hold on my latest treasure, braver
demanding we're eternally together
my sweet, fathomless new poet love






When My Vagina Saved My Life

Vietnam conflict
our male classmates fought and died
we girls weren't drafted



Suggestions

when i write poetry
i take the rules of english
as suggestions
made by a maiden aunt with alzheimer's
giving me wedding night advice
on my 33rd wedding anniversary

kiss his fingertips first
she admonishes
from memory
mistaking her sister's newborn
for the man of her dreams
she never married

quotation marks
missing
who cares who said what when
or why or how

poems
are fodder for the scatterbrain
feeding on itself
in a frenzy
of catch-up nutrition
vitamins for the soul
word figments mistaken for leafy greens
imagggine nations
roaring
into second place
with shame lowered eyes
spelling "beautiful" without the "a"
a fifth grade spelling bee
middle school social golf course hazard
the ball sliced into the woods
missing the pond
but also missing the green
rows upon rows of gold stars
awarded for perfect spelling
notwithstanding

capitalization
is for the birds
crows perched on the roof
waiting for trash day
and a neighborhood acquaintance carelessly exposing
the rotten morsels
that all crows love

the mighty comma
wallows in self pity
ignored forgotten maligned
OUT OF PLACE
no room for commas
when carriage returns do just nicely
thank you berry much
my poet
fast food word deliverer

leave us not forget the colloquialisms
the expletives
the borrowed-from-the-french
the technical terms with no cousins in the thesaurus
these fiends all exorcised from true poetry
poems, after all, are written to say
"I LOVE YOU!"
in a language you the reader want to understand

for a share of this lovingkindness
you are willing to sift through
word detritus
wade through undetectable grammatical fauxs pas
and put up with mismanagement of vowels

we can all do just fine without
"Rules of English"
when we want to feel alive loved

we'll die soon enough
our tombstone and obituary
will be carefully edited
for Proper English
by somebody who cares for English
but has never met Our Heart







Open Arms

the prodigal son
has not yet come back home, but
hope springs eternal




Popcorn

We're all in this heat
I haven't exploded, yet
Others, at random



Stay tuned...

I finally collected my poetry into a book to be entitled, "Mourning Dove Dawn." I will be making the book available for purchase as a hard-cover book, a soft-cover book, and also as an e-book... once I figure out how to do all that! This is my first attempt at self-publishing.

The e-book will most likely sell for the minimum, which I think at the moment is ninety-nine cents in American money. The soft-cover book will be made available as inexpensively as possible, but the hard-cover book will be pricey, as I want to make it a beautiful treasure and keepsake, as much for my own benefit as for those who might like to own one or give it as a gift.

I love the smell of new books. I love the feel of a book in my hand, and the way it looks as I leaf through its pages. Though I have never been a fan of dust jackets, I love attached bookmark ribbons and gilt edges and pretty, rose-printed end papers on linen-bound books. In selecting a printing format, I will probably have to settle for what I can afford. I am shopping around.

All of my poetry will still be available for free on this blog or wherever else I manage to post, though many poems have since been edited or updated or re-written altogether, and I have not always kept my blogs up-to-date with the near-constant revisions.

If you want a better-formed book of my poems and you want to make arrangements with a printer, I would be happy to provide the content for these words to be printed up to create the gorgeous book of your dreams.

If you would like to make books of my words available for sale, please distribute any profits according to my wishes: use the proceeds to make books and musical instruments available to all, along with the teaching of the skills necessary to employ them, and do what is possible to assure people have the time to actively pursue the creation of their own music and their own combinations of words.

You can choose to print all or just a selection of the poems, whichever you would most enjoy. The poems may be printed out, one per page, with plenty of blank space for your notes or for journaling. They can be made into a calendar, printed on a tee shirt or mug or other object. I myself have printed out my haiku on single business cards, and collected the cards into a three-ring binder, for easy reference.

The making of books no longer needs to be done the old-fashioned way. I ask only that you not combine my words with those of others, which might create a different story than the one I have intended to tell, unless I have granted such permission in advance, or unless you are absolutely sure that including my words in a collection will not alter my message.

I am excited to be bringing to print my first book.

In my mind, every hard-bound book should have on its inside cover a white square sticker that announces "This book belongs to _________" and have a single name proudly handwritten on the line. This sticker is designed to encourage the free lending out and then the happy return of the book to its owner.

In my mind, every hard-bound book given as a gift needs a written explanation on the blank page inside the front cover, as to why it was specifically selected for the recipient, out of the myriad possibilities in gift-giving. You may use this:


My Dearest,
     Many happy returns to you as we together celebrate the anniversary of your birth! The day you came into my life was a day that changed me forever for the better.
     I hope this book brings you joy and courage and wisdom and happiness and peace of mind and all the wonderful things it has brought to me. All that, and more good I wish for you as you continue your journey through time and space.
     I hope you come to cherish this book's continuous freshness as I have. I enjoyed it the first time I read it and have looked forward with increasing pleasure to spending yet another bit of quiet time with this old friend.
     With All My Tender Love,
           Yours Truly
P.S. Always remember, whatever the question, love is the answer. I'll love you forever!"



It saddens me to see good books tied up and sitting at the curb, heartlessly discarded and waiting to be taken away for permanent disposal. When you are ready to part with it, please make your best effort to find and give this book to someone new who will hopefully appreciate it.


More to come...

Happy Not-My-Own-Religion Holiday

"Haiku Greeting Cards For All Occasions"

as you celebrate
your wrong religious beliefs
I'm happy with you




No Visible Marks

poet
what made you a poet

what made you pause
in the middle of an otherwise ordinary life
and made you stop
to smell the roses
and write it down

what terrible farce
of the frailties of human existence
did you witness

or did you play a forced role
no one could possibly imagine
so you recorded it
for humanity's sake
for your own sake
to assure yourself you were still grounded
and not swept up in the madness all around you

are your words
an unleashed warning
to the innocent

rhetorical questions
in poetry
never require question marks
as you know
fellow poet



Not All Poems Have A Title

not all poems rhyme
not all haiku have a season word
not all smiles are returned




 

Haiku Selfie

I'm so addicted
can't resist the urge to haiku
oh god, so messed up

  


 

Tales

stories are retold
the author with the best one
forever copied


 


too generous

one more flake of snow?
how kind of you to offer
but I've had enough





White and Black

I am white and when I see a person of color
I notice that I'm not a person of color

I am instantly reminded
that there exists in our world
the human thought of racism

and I believe that racism is evil

The thought that evil exists is a painful thought

I am white and when I see a person of color
I notice that I'm not a person of color
and I feel pain

I am white and when I see a person of color
I notice that they are a person of color

I am instantly reminded
that there exists in our world
the human thought of racism

and I believe that racism is evil

and I remember that the two co-exist
The evil of racism / The thought that racism is evil
and I believe that all evil things will end

The thought that evil will end gives me great joy

I am white and when I see a person of color
I notice that they are a person of color
and I feel joy






 



spring sunbeams

(haiku)

real sunshine at last
the kind that finds snow hiding
and melts it away




the hidden

(haiku)

writing my haiku
gives me a weapon to fight
big, scary demons






haunted

(haiku)

haiku poetry
one-way communication
with the long-lost dead




how to have a happy spouse

(haiku)

live in harmony
men, put the toilet seat down
women, shut up



(An alternate title for this poem is "The Ups and Downs of Marriage.")







intimate connections


(inspired by "The Idle Thoughts of an Idle Fellow" by Jerome K. Jerome, available free on Project Gutenberg)



(haiku)

the tiny coral
laboring to build his house
joins two continents

  

Shared Decembers



(Inspired by a translation of Catullus’s famous funeral poem known as “Hail and Farewell”)


when I heard

my heart dropped, through the floor

I flew through airports, never seeing doors

hot tears swept visions from my head

our shared Decembers

not a shred left

visions from my head fled



when I arrived

to see your body stretched abed

I cried my final words, as well unsaid

for all the ears you've left for hearing

too‐late pleas for one last shred

of brother's pranks and drunken phone calls,

retorts of sound advice



brothers' love

visions in your head

echoes of my sound advice



calling twice

I love you, bro

I love you, too

a brother's love

and sound advice



calling twice

I love you, man

I love you, too

a brother's love

echoes of sound advice



our lives

they somehow came apart

untwined from days of bunk beds

game controllers

sets of Legos

Nerf Gun wars, broken vases

Texas Hold 'Em table, cards and chips

matching Spring Break surfboards

push‐ups

foreign trips



apart, yet brothers

shared excitement



fading quickly

frozen memories

one toboggan sled,

one ride, two grown-up men



sopping wet

from flooded brother's eyes

a brand‐new suit

a tie

a shirt you'd never buy

they've dressed you for your trip

to where, I cannot guess

I'll find out soon enough

tomorrow

soon enough

who cares!

we shared Decembers!



listening

to my echoed calls

our highs and lows



"What's up?"

"Take care, bro!"

we still say,

"See you later..."

"next year's wedding..."

"family funeral..."

"birthday party..."

shared Decembers














What's In This Poetry Blog?






Mourning Dove Dawn





Table of Contents



What Is Poetry?

poetry concepts defined but not pinned down nor cornered nor tortured into conformity


Precision Warriors: A Poet's Hall of Fame

sharing the human connection with those who have also paid attention


Season Sushi

flowing through the physical world on a time surfboard


Nature Struck

the awesome that happens when you disconnect from all things electric and simply pay attention to what's left after that


Haiku Collections

each bunch is a whirlwind of poems rounded up and tied together with a pretty ribbon


A Parent Gives

on discovering a loved one's implosion


Haibun (prose with haiku)

created when a beloved haiku poem-child of mine whispers to me begging permission to venture forth and seek out its own further extrapolation


Image Poetry (poem/image)

a picture-poem partially composed of its own correspondence with the universe


Haiga (haiku with image)

a story in which the words argue with the picture and vice versa


Committing Poetry

on the act of placing words adjacent to one another using a heart mirror


Shards of Discarded Soul Mates

an archaeological dig into what once had been deceived into believing it was able to master a willing young soul


Global Heartwarming

baby steps toward the idea of what humanity might be shopping for in building the utopia of its dreams


Shorter Poems

it just is


Longer Poems

after diving headfirst into the depths of an idea and finding oneself surfacing in the center of a word conflagration


Poem Pastiche (all poems, titles)

distilled verbose thoughts


Order, Alphabetical (all poems, first lines)

first lines of poems in this poetry collection


Blog Archive

titles of all entries in this blog but not necessarily in the order in which they were written



















































Twitter haiku artist

(haiku)

@AshiAkira
I see Japan through your eyes
my heart leaps with joy



can we talk

(haiku)

just want to tell you
I like you when you're sober
love you either way












loner

(haiku)

planet earth too small
pity the poor misanthrope
nowhere else to live


 

Pi-ku

In honor of Pi Day, here is a radical of "pi-ku"
(eight-syllable poems in three lines, of 3, 1, and 4 syllables)


Pi Poem Piquant
key lime pie
melds
sweet and sour


Pi Poem Party
celebrate
"pi"
eat a "pi"zza


Pi Poem Puzzles
mathematics
solves
great mysteries


Pi Poem Passionate
skipping stones
laughs
skinny dipping


Pi Poem Pretend
carrot nose
scarf
coal eyes and mouth


Pi Poem Pasture
campfire songs
moon
whispering in tents


Pi Poem Pick
certainty
doubt
just one of these


Pi Poem Pre-Teens
my first kiss
lips
over braces




















magazine quiz

(haiku)

"Choke on weak coffee?"
Compatibility Test
passed. Both said, "I do."




smoldering coals

(haiku)

snowstorm's flurries swirl
staying warm by the unlit hearth
reading love letters from old boyfriends


 

teen magazine

(haiku)

quiz: "What is true love?"
wait... I know this one... I think...
give me a minute...




resolution

(haiku)

guide to happiness
as the year ends, reflect on
overlooked blessings




Ode to ancient haiku poet Matsuo Basho











~  ~  ~  frog  ~  ~  ~  pond  ~  ~  ~  splash  ~  ~  ~










Forms of Poetry

GLOSSARY: "poem" "haiku" "senryu"



poem

A "poem" is a word or words that move a person, either a writer or a reader. More specifically, whatever the poet says is a poem, is a poem. He should know. He created it. Ditto for the reader. When the reader comes into contact with words and says, "That's poetry!" it is poetry. Additionally, anything besides words that evokes in the mind of a person the feeling that they have just had a poetic experience, is defined as poetry.

Traditionally, a poem is a beautiful word drawing, meant to capture the essence of a strong emotion and place it in the reader's mind. It has been gained through the poet's close observation, fostered by his recognition of a truth about human life. This recognition of a universal truth creates a feeling of connectedness among those who come to an understanding and full appreciation of this truth, of themselves with other people and with the universe; and creates in them a calmness of sense that one has a place within that universe, and imports a sense that one is in possession of a particular knowledge about that space and about oneself. Or, a knowledge that there is no rhyme or reason to the universe, so there is no hope of placement within it, or connection to it or to other people. This feeling, too, of the futility of believing that there is a connection possible, paradoxically connects one with others who have also recognized this futility as a truth. Whatever is the feeling induced by the poetic experience, it stands to comfort the poet and the reader in a way that is biologically satisfying, waking up the area of the brain connected to honing the social skills necessary for survival. Because proper use of this area of the brain is so closely related to one's actual survival, poetry is a particularly personal and invasive experience.

Traditional forms of poetry additionally follow specific constraining rules, such as a limit to the number of syllables in a line, a particular numbered sequence of lines, or a rhyming structure in a series of lines.



haiku

"Haiku" is a work of art that can only be created in a pen and ink drawing using the traditional characters of the Japanese language. It is a poem gained through observation and description of nature and reflective of a truth about the human condition.

"Traditional haiku" is a poem evoking the haiku experience, though it may be created in any language.

"Natural haiku" contains reference only to that which is observed in the natural world untouched by humans. No direct mention is made of the existence of any human thought or activity.

A haiku which contains a reference to nature may also contain a reference to a human experience. The one is used to illustrate and deepen understanding of the other.

A haiku is very short; it can be spoken aloud in a single breath. It contains a season word meant to evoke a memory of a physical reaction of the human body in its ever-changing natural environment, or an emotional reaction of the human spirit to changes it encounters in its ever-changing environment.

The experiencing of a haiku evokes a sudden change in perspective which creates a surprise, which, in the reader, leads to the recognition of the point in the poet's mind from which he leaped; this is similar to an "aha!" moment.

More broadly, "haiku" is a poem that can be written in any language and, though incorporation of a "season word" is desirable, it is not required. All of the other elements of constraint in the creation of a traditional haiku do still apply.

"Five-seven-five haiku" is a three-line haiku written in seventeen syllables under syllabic constraints for each line; the first, second, and third lines must contain five, seven, and five spoken syllables, respectively. The poet may follow the constraint of using the dictionary-defined syllabic structure of a word, but it is preferred to use the spoken language in determining syllable count. Pronunciation of syllables depends on the speaker, who may be speaking in a particular dialect or may use syllables in a different manner than usual for emotional or dramatic effect. Therefore, the word "poem" may be counted as one or two syllables, depending on how it is spoken within the poem. In reading aloud any 5-7-5 haiku, the reader must find the correct syllable structure to speak the poem aloud so that it adds up to exactly seventeen syllables. Any summation to seventeen syllables is acceptable, even if they do not fit neatly into the 5-7-5 three-line structure, though the 5-7-5 structure is the aim. The idea is to achieve a balance of the three spoken lines that effects the feeling experienced in using the 5-7-5 structure.

Each of the three lines in a 5-7-5 haiku can be read independently of the others, and each is a complete thought and expresses its own meaning. Together, the three lines express an extended thought.

"Seventeen-syllable haiku" follows the rules for 5-7-5 haiku, except that the seventeen syllables do not need to break neatly into three lines which each can be read independently of the other two lines.

The definition of haiku, similar to the definition of a poem, is further expanded to include anything at all deemed to be haiku by its creator or by the one who experiences it.

"American haiku" may be any form of haiku created by one who identifies as American.

"Found haiku" is the poem which results from a reader's having fortuitously discovered that he has stumbled across something extraordinary: a haiku has been brazenly hiding in plain sight among the ordinary words of prose he had been perusing. The bits which comprise the haiku are then carefully collected and stored for future enjoyment. Knowing that such treasures exist in the wild adds a level of excitement to reading. Keep your eyes open; a haiku might be so close that, if it was a snake, it would have bit you.

Any haiku can be breaking any or all of the rules of haiku and still be a haiku.

Examples of different forms of haiku may be found on the website: https://sites.google.com/site/susannaleepoetry/



senryu

A senryu is any haiku that breaks the rules of traditional haiku but calls for its own label because it has less to do with a reference to nature and more to do with the dark humor which results from close observation of any one (or more) of the elements which comprise all things human.

I prefer to label all of my "senryu" as "haiku." I ignore the term "senryu," as I don't intend for readers to have to keep straight those distinctions which are borderline in adding meaning to this venture.







blinders on

(haiku)

escape from real life
write a haiku on Twitter
snow on frozen pond





speeding ticket explanation

(haiku)

eight eyes, hairy legs
black spider on my dashboard
it jumps! STEP ON IT!




mission

(haiku)

vow to Teresa
saint who saw heaven on earth
make it so for all



party poopers

(haiku)

not a day goes by
when mosquitoes don't eat me
sole summer complaint





stormy harbor

(haiku)

"All hands below deck!"
"Ideas?" "Yes, more champagne!"
lightning threatens yacht





sweets

(haiku)

taking time tonight
relaxing with family
chocolate chip cookies





taking flight

(haiku)

birds, squirrels, dragonflies,
bats, butterflies, hummingbirds,
soaring in my mind





social mirror

(haiku)

it is pitiful
I value my own haiku
more when retweeted




the first hour

(haiku)

"enjoy these moments"
contemplate wise words at dawn
sipping my coffee



the visit

(haiku)

soaking in my son
each time he leaves I don't know
if he will come back




stalker

(haiku)

that creepy feeling
searching roofs through sunglasses
that damn crow again




truths

(haiku)

believe in our God
help yourself and all others
question existence


 

tea for one

(haiku)

cradle my teacup
streaming hot tears overflow
my teen son...so lost



summer stew

(haiku)

black crow on hot roof
swan simmers in man-made pond
cat slinks under deck




the glistening

(haiku)

a single bird calls
entranced by morning dewdrops
sparkles on green leaves




Snow Angels

(haiku)

children softly sleep
snow, no school, don't wake them up
unbroken whitescape


 

sniffing

(haiku)

early morning walk
puppy says hi to his friends
pees on every bush


 

slacker

(haiku)

watched it on TV
New York City Marathon
stand up... my knees creak




what if

what if the best tasting foods
were also the most nutritious?

what if the most fun thing to do
was also good exercise?

what if doing what makes you most happy
would also make others ecstatic?

what if we had all of the answers
and also knew all of the questions?






what are we fighting for?

(haiku)

war is always fought
so that worthy survivors
can enjoy world peace




cautious

(haiku)

"His plane crashed last night"
you won't read this of my dad
he won't fly at all






shorthand

(haiku)

a tiny haiku
is never a mere trifle
iceberg tip tells tale



time wanderer

(haiku)

in February
visit my Autumn haiku
to see falling leaves




hope

(haiku)

thank God things do change
Aung San Suu Kyi elected
humanity wins


Haiku Gift Cards

The 5-7-5 Wishing Well

greeting cards for all occasions




NEWBORN
having a baby
changes your life forever
cherish these moments

FIRST BIRTHDAY
a child's precious smiles
such wondrous joy to behold!
our hearts are captured

RITE OF PASSAGE INTO YOUNG ADULTHOOD
today you're grown up
new responsibilities
you will make us proud

NEW DRIVER
look out, new driver!
don't worry, it's okay
no money for gas

18TH BIRTHDAY
you're eighteen years old
not a baby anymore
now you can pay rent

HIGH-SCHOOL GRADUATION
as you find your path
we expect great things from you
make us very proud

COLLEGE GRADUATION
great accomplishment!
you've earned a college degree
don't you feel smarter?

ENGAGEMENT
made for each other
planning to share a new life
let love guide you on

WEDDING
together as one
you begin this adventure
enjoy the journey

FIRST PREGNANCY
heard you're expecting
parenthood's not for sissies
sleep now, while you can

PARTY INVITATION
you are invited!
join us as we celebrate
make our joy complete

COME-AS-YOU-ARE PARTY
what are you wearing?
come to our party like that
dress as you are now

FAMILY REUNION
if you think you're weird
you should see the rest of us
meet your relatives

CHRISTMAS
if "Joy" were a gift
I could put under the tree
I'd wrap one for you

HAPPY NOT-MY-OWN-RELIGION HOLIDAY
as you celebrate
your wrong religious beliefs
I'm happy with you

HOLIDAY
the best things in life
you can't put into a box
I wish these for you

THANK YOU TO A VOLUNTEER
we appreciate
from the bottom of our hearts
all the good you do

COMING OUT
sharing this moment
is especially joyful
so happy for you!

BIRTHDAY FOR ONE WHO HAS EVERYTHING
congratulations!
you have everything you need
and you're still breathing

OVER-THE-HILL BIRTHDAY
you still surprise me
birthdays chase you and chase you
but you outrun them

RETIREMENT
leisure awaits you
free time to do what you want
relax. you've earned it

MISSING YOU
you live far away
yet I see your smiling face
each night in my dreams

RECONCILIATION
remembering you
I think of all we once had
and I want you back

DOWN-SIZING
you told me your boss
doesn't need you anymore
that must be so hard

DIFFICULT SITUATION
you are not alone
as you face this new challenge
I'm here by your side

SICKNESS
sorry you are ill
hoping modern medicine
makes you better soon

ACCIDENT
life just isn't fair
let me know what I can do
as you recover

INTERVENTION
just want to tell you
I like you when you're sober
love you either way

HOSPICE
wishing you great strength
through what you are facing now
call me anytime

SYMPATHY
so very sorry
for the loss of your loved one
I am here for you

LOSS OF A BELOVED PET
having a great pet
is one of life's true treasures
so sad for your loss

100TH BIRTHDAY
one hundred years young
I look to your example
my inspiration